Just a quick tip for stronger writing. If you want more vivid writing that’s absorbing, do an adverb check, and cut them when you can.
This may be a bit hard and you might find yourself tempted to leave some, but only do this when there’s absolutely no better word or phrasing. Good writing is rewriting, and this takes focus and thought.
Yes, it takes more work but it’s a good thing. Checking and cutting adverbs forces you to write with stronger nouns. It can even help increase word count!
Make each word count. Here’s to stronger, vivid, absorbing writing!